I wasnt able to make last critique, but this is what I made. i didnt photoshop anyone to be floating, i asked the models to jump, fall back, lay down, or sit in a chair to get the shots, and then reworked the composition of the frame. i wanted these pictures to have a dream-like feel to them, with the subjects representing a state of mind of the anxieties, freedoms and restrictions found in my mind every day.
please let me know what you think since i wasnt able to be there for critique!
thanks
Nice work Kendra. I am so interested that you play with composition and rearranging our point of view as the viewer to confound our sense of reality and gravity.
ReplyDeleteI love that we are left wondering exactly what we are looking at. I also love the sense of order and symmetry in the diptychs. This is a very tight project.
I wonder about the wisdom of pushing the color casts. Is it just to cover the obvious anchors that would tell us where we are in relation to the reality of the studio shot? Or is it just to make it dreamy. If the latter, I would be tempted to have this sense of dreaminess swirl in and around the protagonists, but leave them clearly emerging from the mist.
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